Add Four Lines

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Add Four Lines

Post by cochisewolf » Sun Oct 30, 2011 8:59 pm

Here's a variation of something we had going before. Just add four lines.
Doesn't have to rhyme, doesn't have to make sense, no rules, just four lines.
I'll start:

I was born in this world
in a dreadnaught of pain
listening to the rantings
of the criminally insane
I indulged myself in the various religions and philosophies but cheerfulness kept breaking through
- Leonard Cohen

I cried because I had no shoes until I met a man who had no class ...
- Unknown Poet

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Re: Add Four Lines

Post by Flapjack » Tue Nov 01, 2011 12:30 am

I sojourn by this urn
a red lantern aflame
Blistering a thorn
the petals burn away

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Re: Add Four Lines

Post by cochisewolf » Tue Nov 01, 2011 3:59 am

I looked into the setting sun
For hope or maybe belonging
But it was only illusion that I peered on
For hope and belonging there was none
I indulged myself in the various religions and philosophies but cheerfulness kept breaking through
- Leonard Cohen

I cried because I had no shoes until I met a man who had no class ...
- Unknown Poet

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Re: Add Four Lines

Post by Flapjack » Wed Nov 02, 2011 1:17 am

so I went inside and saw it rain
I watched the water on the window pane
trickling the glass like an open vein
the thunder struck like horns from a train

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Re: Add Four Lines

Post by cochisewolf » Wed Nov 02, 2011 1:59 am

Imagine my surprise when I
Saw the gleam of an angel's eye
So beautiful and serene
But alas it was not for me ...
I indulged myself in the various religions and philosophies but cheerfulness kept breaking through
- Leonard Cohen

I cried because I had no shoes until I met a man who had no class ...
- Unknown Poet

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Re: Add Four Lines

Post by Flapjack » Wed Nov 02, 2011 3:49 am

fuck the world and fuck the sky, yes; I fuck them left and right
I beat your mammy namby-pamby with 8 strokes like a dodge hemi
so many foes under my soles: I am a mass murderer
so many hoes under my nose: I am the hamburgerlar
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Re: Add Four Lines

Post by cochisewolf » Wed Nov 02, 2011 8:31 am

I used to eat the rotting flesh
of humans who had died
But now I find the sprightly taste
of live ones more divine
I indulged myself in the various religions and philosophies but cheerfulness kept breaking through
- Leonard Cohen

I cried because I had no shoes until I met a man who had no class ...
- Unknown Poet

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Re: Add Four Lines

Post by minderbinder » Wed Nov 02, 2011 3:59 pm

a love strong like death
it's pus burns like fire
go trade a raven
for a stillborne child
Bhagwan told me not to worry. If i do it'll make me sorry. Alright.

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Re: Add Four Lines

Post by cochisewolf » Thu Nov 03, 2011 1:41 am

Ah minderbinder's joined the club!
Glad to see it happen
I like people who are disturbed
About the shape their mind's in!
I indulged myself in the various religions and philosophies but cheerfulness kept breaking through
- Leonard Cohen

I cried because I had no shoes until I met a man who had no class ...
- Unknown Poet

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Re: Add Four Lines

Post by minderbinder » Thu Nov 03, 2011 3:42 am

thanks says mb
like a la-di-da poofter
the mind knows it all
but will the snakes let it happen?
Bhagwan told me not to worry. If i do it'll make me sorry. Alright.

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