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Post by Flapjack » Thu Nov 21, 2013 4:04 am

I'm a bloodsucking faggot.

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Post by Flapjack » Thu Apr 17, 2014 11:07 pm

I can't write poetry anymore. I think it's time I just give it up. All it's done is humiliate me.

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Post by minderbinder » Sat Apr 19, 2014 3:07 pm

been writing the long and bright how humilitating oneself with art you don't give a fuck about is like standing in front of an audience starting to cut your fingers off, i like jokes of that sort and it's an art form by itself, but that's humiliating, too, because the forum logged me out while i was writing and i don't want to cut off my balls in front of an audience a second time this evening. maybe again tomorrow.

just wanted to say, don't take it to serious. art for one, shit for the other, who cares? and some of your poems where pretty funny.
Bhagwan told me not to worry. If i do it'll make me sorry. Alright.

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Post by Flapjack » Fri Jun 19, 2015 1:03 am

Here's a dumb song I'm working on. I'm just posting it here to organize my thoughts.

O, baby, I'm falling in love without you.
O, God, please, tell me it's not the truth.
O, baby, I don't know what I should do ...
with or without you.

I give her money... for her time.
O, I'd do anything to make you mine.
I pay the price; O, I sell my soul ...
for someone I don't know.

O, baby, I can feel it ache in my head.
O, God, I'm going crazy in a bad way.
O, baby, I can't believe a word you say ...
but I still hope you'll save me.

O, God, I'm falling in love without you.
O, baby, please, tell me it's not the truth.
O, God, I don't know what I should do ...
with or without you.

I want you so badly I can't escape.
O, God, I'm going crazy in a bad way.
O, baby, I don't know what I should say ...

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Post by Flapjack » Sun Jul 05, 2015 6:14 pm

I've been making these pop-like songs, and they're a lot of fun and sound better than some of the a little too serious stuff I've tried in the past.

Baby, I've been looking at you.
Even though I feel like ... I ain't suppose to.
I know what's right, but I'm doing wrong.
I'm watching you, baby, and I ain't the only one.

I'm watching you, baby, and I ain't the only one.
I'm watching you, baby, and I ain't the only one.

I see your face. I see your body.
In a lonely place, don't wanna get started.
I see your eyes, the wind through your hair,
in a lonely place, they turn to me and they say,

... Baby, I see you looking at me,
Even though I feel like you ain't suppose to be.
I know what's right, and you're doing wrong.
You're watching me, baby, but you ain't the only one.

You're watching me, baby, but you ain't the only one.
You're watching me, baby, but you ain't the only one.

How did I end up here, so far away?
From anything clear, from anything that calms me.
I see your face, the wind through your hair,
in a lonely place, someone else stands there

... I see you looking at me.
Even though I feel like we weren't suppose to meet.
You know what's right, and you're doing wrong.
So, I've been watching you, lately, but you ain't the only one.

I've been watching you, lately, but you ain't the only one.
I've been watching you, lately, but you ain't the only one.

I've done my crime, done my fair share.
Too many times, and my mistakes lead me here.
But I just want to be ... with you next to me,
in a lonely place ... O, God, what've I done today?

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Re: Flapjack's Poetry Corner

Post by Flapjack » Fri Sep 09, 2016 1:39 pm

I dont even write poetry anymore. These werent poems, though. They were songs.

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Re: Flapjack's Poetry Corner

Post by teeko » Mon Sep 12, 2016 7:23 am

Damn scientific calculators always meddling.
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All lies contain truth.

All truths are circumstantial.

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Re: Flapjack's Poetry Corner

Post by Flapjack » Mon Jan 28, 2019 5:25 am

Flapjack wrote:I'm a bloodsucking faggot.
This is good.

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Re: Flapjack's Poetry Corner

Post by Flapjack » Mon Jan 28, 2019 5:26 am

Flapjack wrote:I dont even write poetry anymore.
This is also good.

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Post by kill_blind_elite » Fri Aug 07, 2020 9:34 pm

nothing that i ever wanted,
Waiting.
breathing in the pain,
Hater.

refraining from the weather, ... Rain and tempest

running, pleasure.
Turning churning.
Fuck I'm frail
It's so real.
All illusion.
Stoke the fire!
Tears are coming
burning.


so many friends,
so many ends,
nothing that you have, for me?

these and those
Stories told
Getting old
Have i ever been hurt by the cold?,
and lonely
Scream underwater
Sadists, masters of deception.
i want to explode.

better than that,
the sun is coming.
Here it comes again,
pain it seems,
an ally,
my old friend.

BUT!!! ...he was a lier, deliberate and cold.
Fear brings destruction
the young and old.

all are hurting,
none are rising.
Falling down,
In our eyes
No horizon.

So listless and angry

not their fault that they are lashing.
consequence still passing,
crashing
judging, those still hurting,

calloused friend, used,
amusement
painful lover,
fear, abused... descent

it's so dark ,
but its ok,
the dark will leave again.
Now fading

all my friends.
gone in this darkness,
blinded
sightless, bleeding.
crossing
it still hurts though.

watching..... Waiting.... For a time when.
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