Intrinsic Harmony

Entheogen related fiction and non-fiction.
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aurora_borealis
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Intrinsic Harmony

Post by aurora_borealis » Sat Jan 05, 2013 7:31 pm

Golden embers in the sky
Why must you be so very high?

Shadows cast beneath the sun
Can they ever be undone?

Tremulous waves formed at sea
What will they come to be?

Observations neverending
Interrogations pending
Messages forever sending
Your soul--blending

Golden embers in the sky
Way up you are nigh

Shadows cast beneath the sun
You cease to be when seen as one

Tremulous waves formed at sea
All another part of me

Observations abiding
Interrogations subsiding
Messages still gliding
Your spirit--riding

Sky, Earth, and Sea
Man, Animal, and Tree
Forever you, forever me...

aurora_borealis
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Re: Intrinsic Harmony

Post by aurora_borealis » Sat Jan 05, 2013 7:41 pm

Here is another, and I'd like if someone could tell me whether or not I'm using the world "naught" in the right context (although it's sort of obsolete).

Within and Without

Within and without
All to be seen and felt

How naught one see,
THe truths that be?

How naught one feel,
The truths that are real?

Curious, unafraid, and seeking...
They all will reveal
What others try to steal

Ignorant, fearful, and shamed...
Curses will be named
For the (ill) truths that be famed

Look to the sea of stars
And to the patterns of the trees

How they reflects the sea within
And the trees without
These things exist to banish doubt

Don't tread too far
From the silent path
Don't be fooled
By the glorified road
Knowing that there are many of one node

Within and without
All to be seen and felt

How naught one see,
The truths that be?

How naught one feel,
The truths that are real?

Curious, unafraid, and seeking...
They all will reveal
What others try to steal

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Metanoian
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Re: Intrinsic Harmony

Post by Metanoian » Tue Jan 08, 2013 3:28 am

I'm not sure if it's the right context, but it doesn't sound or look wrong.

If it sounds right, then use it :)
Pulled and kneaded like salt water taffy.

Interconnecting peoploids, like tinker toy ferris wheels, rotating counterclockwise for eternity.

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Re: Intrinsic Harmony

Post by aurora_borealis » Wed Jan 09, 2013 6:40 pm

Thanks for the input. Yeah, it sounded right in my mind so now it shall stay.

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