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Re: I want you bad girl -

PostPosted: Fri Jul 01, 2011 5:10 pm
by Thisoldman
Nicely played.

Re: I want you bad girl -

PostPosted: Fri Jul 01, 2011 8:28 pm
by Flapjack
all these poems are trash now.

They will only stay here where they will just be forgotten.

Is it not so cold?

Re: I want you bad girl -

PostPosted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 5:48 am
by Flapjack
I like your wooly whisps of hair and their light whisking wade
floating flimsy through the air aflare slightly and frayed
brushing back behind your neck between each shoulder blade
swinging with your walking waist after its breech has swayed


I fuckin love poetry guys.

I don't think woman completely understand

that this is what my life is all about

I pray to God, I cry and write poetry every single day

Re: I want you bad girl -

PostPosted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 3:58 pm
by SalvinorinAlpha
You've got some talent Flappy. You're going to make someone real proud. :)

Re: I want you bad girl -

PostPosted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 5:47 pm
by quantumbrujo
you got any sunglasses baby? cause I wanna cum on your face.

how's that for romantic? or how about
Hey baby you got a nice smile, i wanna cum all over it.

Re: I want you bad girl -

PostPosted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 6:48 pm
by Flapjack
lol

maybe I should just stick to writing about suicide and depression

Re: I want you bad girl -

PostPosted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 7:21 pm
by SalvinorinAlpha
Nah, you gotta be diverse.

Re: I want you bad girl -

PostPosted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 1:29 am
by Flapjack
I like your wooly whisps of hair and their light whisking wade
floating flimsy through the air aflare slightly and frayed
brushing back behind your neck between each shoulder blade
swinging with your walking waist after its britch has swayed

your face is like the candle lit white waxes warming wane
your body's like the mantels molded ornamental frame
your eyes are like the waving wicks fires open flame
a soft orange light that flickers off of everything

beyond the great seven seas, along each grain of sand
above every continent across the plains of land
billowing bright nimbus clouds extend their reach and hand
yawning open efflorescent flower leafs expand

listen baby girl, you make my heart shine
I keep love in my body and your thoughts in mind
a rosey white arrow from above the skyline
stuck into the apple and out through the rind



It's such a pretty poem... this woman must be made of iron

Re: I want you bad girl

PostPosted: Mon Apr 04, 2016 12:08 am
by Flapjack
It's interesting to see how low my emotional intelligence is and was

Re: I want you bad girl

PostPosted: Fri Nov 16, 2018 9:16 am
by Hermannus_Heremitus
Meh.