did you write this or something?
i'll review it, but im a hard critic and you'll have to give me a copy.
unless its really really good i promis not to distribute it (why would i bother)
couple problems i noticed right away.
"The author has spent 7 years researching and 3 years organizing this work attempting to inform the reader of the pervasive history of the Amanita Muscaria mushroom."
attempting should be dropped. and pervasive to.
how can a history be pervasive? for somone with pervasive in his title he seems confued about its meaning.
Also why talk about the years, if the book is well researched it will speak for itself.
honestly the first page is terribly written, the quote isnt even formatted right.. sight... but dont give up. life is a highway
we could tear into it a page at a time here at edot, but the pdf format on lulu is too anyonning for me to continue.
eaither way a book like this needs to start with a forward; where to state your intent, and excuse your bias, talk about your research methods. speacualte on the many many speculation therin...
....not half a rant about how the western world mind fucked you (you should have let it teach to to write at least )
ive decided at this point that you wrote this and are kind of wierd and indirect about posting it.
such is life
ps why is it tagged under Atheism.
that donst make sense.
Last edited by foucault
on Sat Aug 30, 2008 3:14 pm, edited 1 time in total.